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Lizella, this was extremely impressive. The allusions, the imagery and world-building! T

You are working with reality in a way that I have never experienced, shattering my notions of subjectivity and belittling the dangers I work with. In the communication of your thoughts, you bring me into the phasing of light that reality consists of, warning me of the suicide possible if I would just stop concentrating. I think your point is that the disease of consciousness, or the pain, stress, and tragedy of consciousness comes from the inability to stop concentrating. Is the lesson that all humanity has simultaneously agreed to remain in a state of concentration? That is so riveting to me,

I would like to start a correspondence with you. Talk about our writing and other things regarding art in general. Subscribe, for I have done the same. I imagine our bonded will power with these exercises will bear much fruit. I'll be in touch.

Looking forward to more

The Joyful Fool's avatar

I’ve been thinking a lot of Genesis 2 & 3 lately and your work resonates. What an original take on creation and an excellent twist at the end. Ready for more!

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